Pretty good what you have here... I don't have the best quality headphones atm, so I can't give off a fair review without making mistakes due to the headphones, but you have a pretty solid song here.
I love this.
No complaints with this one.
Thanks for the review!
You have a really good song on your hands, but it sounds really empty atm... it gets better as it progresses, but it never really leave the empty feeling. You could use a stableSub bass to get rid of the empty feeling, and some pads to create some atmosphere.
Otherwise, solid song you have here.
Thanks for your help!
Nicely done... submit a few more songs, and I won't mind scouting you.
Hey, thank you so much. I have a few more songs I can put up, and soon, I'll be posting audio loops I've created for video game and movie use.
I think what's causing the drowing on the song after :50 is the amount of decay and reverb on your pad because it is kinda long making it seem really overbearing on the melody of the song... if you have a method of reducing those (not by much) then I think it'll fit better.
Otherwise, nice work.
Thanks so much for reviewing! I did figure out something that's contributing to the drowning: the delay crash. I'll definitely see if your suggestion helps with it!
Thanks for listening!
The only thing this song really need is a pad because it sounds like it's missing something in the background, and if you can blend a pad (maybe something like an electronic-sounding pad) or even create the pad synth on your own, it'll come out great.
Otherwise, you have a pretty solid song.
I agree with LazyBucks, and the reason why I need to hear an original work before I'll scout you is that I need to know what you can make on you're own talent.
And also, if you submitted original work before, you need to title it as such because all of your submission have the sonic title under it making it Sega's original work instead of your own.
So submit a song under your own creation, and then pm me... and I'll see if it qualifies.
Please note: I have already been scouted. It's my collaborator, EspioKaos, who has not. [See the following tracks: Industrial Ruins, Industrial Intrusion, Reploid Deployment and Industrial Ruins- Stillness]
Well Done... I enjoyed this.
Glad you liked it.
I think that the voice could be a little more pronounce and also some a slight delay on it with some reverb so we feel the fullness of the voice.
Otherwise, you have a very solid song here! Great work!
Anyway, if you can, take a look at <http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/472301> and tell me what you think about it!
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